Tuesday, August 4, 2015

Day at the Museum    Raw Writing no editing right out of my head.
By, Angela Adame

Thomas is so excited today his class is going to the animal museum. He sit's patiently at his desk as his teacher is calling roll. They all head out to the bus with their lunches in hand and ready to go. They all get on the bus and head to the museum WOW! he is looking at all the cars and homes and big buildings he's getting excited. The kids laughing and having fun in the bus,

Thomas starts to see animals along the drive he know's he's getting close to the museum all happy the kids start yelling Were here Were here! the teacher yells back Yes we are please sit down. The bus pulls into the parking lot and let's the kids out, Yippee Yippee all excitement everywhere. The teacher opens the door and they are met by the tour guide, Thomas is amazed by what he sees so many animals and some taller then the buildings he seen coming here, WOW echo's all through the first floor, the teacher puts the name tags on all her students.


Ok! said the tour guide let's get started, the tour guide explained the animals that are around them, Thomas seen a skeleton of a big animal but didn't know what it was, he raised his hand the tour guide said yes Thomas, What is that? and it has lots of bones. Well that is a dinosaur skeleton they walked the earth a long time ago. WOW all the kids said, we have many here that our archaeologist found and gave to are museum. This is so neat Thomas said yes Thomas the tour guide said with a smile.

Now let's move down to this side they saw the apes, tigers, bears, and lot's more skeletons Thomas is having the time of his life. It is time for lunch and they are all bummed to go but were very hungry, all excited and talking about what they saw inside laughing eating lunch. After lunch the teacher said of we are going to see the tar pits before we go home. Thomas loved the tar pits he is reading about them in his history book. The kids and teacher headed to the back and their they are the tar pits wow Thomas was so happy he knew they were here before he was and knew their might be treasures in side. 

It was time to go and all the kids were getting tired but had fun, specially Thomas this is one of his favorite days he was glad he went to school.  The End!
                                      

Tuesday, June 30, 2015

Oh No Rosie Looses Her Yarn Ball

Oh No! Rosie Looses Her Yarn Ball
BY Angela Adame





Rosie is frantic she lost her yarn ball and is looking all over her room and can't find it anywhere, Oh No! Where is my new yarn ball MEOW MEOW she led out cries.  Mama my yarn ball is missing. Well where did you play with it last? I think outside, ya that's it, Rosie runs outside looking all over for her yarn ball running in and out of bushes then climbing up trees.

Oh My! where can it be? MEOW MEOW. She heard a puppy barking next door she climbed a little higher and saw the puppy playing with her yarn ball. My yarn ball how did he get it? Hi Rosie, BUZZ BUZZ, Hi Billy, whatchya doing? Looking for my yarn ball and I see the puppy next door has it, not sure how it got there.

Oh, me and Hilda were playing with it last night I guess we accidentally dropped it, I'm sorry Rosie, that's OK, I guess he can keep it, he is having to much fun to take it away I'll share it.

Rosie learned a lesson that day, it's nice to share your toys with others that don't have any.


The End!   Audio only cold reading :)
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