Day at the Museum Raw Writing no editing right out of my head.
By, Angela Adame
Thomas is so excited today his class is going to the animal museum. He
sit's patiently at his desk as his teacher is calling roll. They all head out
to the bus with their lunches in hand and ready to go. They all get on the bus
and head to the museum WOW! he is looking at all the cars and homes and big
buildings he's getting excited. The kids laughing and having fun in the bus,
Thomas starts to see animals along the drive he know's he's getting close
to the museum all happy the kids start yelling Were here Were here! the teacher
yells back Yes we are please sit down. The bus pulls into the parking lot and
let's the kids out, Yippee Yippee all excitement everywhere. The teacher opens
the door and they are met by the tour guide, Thomas is amazed by what he sees
so many animals and some taller then the buildings he seen coming here, WOW
echo's all through the first floor, the teacher puts the name tags on all her
students.
Ok! said the tour guide let's get started, the tour guide explained the
animals that are around them, Thomas seen a skeleton of a big animal but didn't
know what it was, he raised his hand the tour guide said yes Thomas, What is
that? and it has lots of bones. Well that is a dinosaur skeleton they walked
the earth a long time ago. WOW all the kids said, we have many here that our
archaeologist found and gave to are museum. This is so neat Thomas said yes
Thomas the tour guide said with a smile.
Now let's move down to this side they saw the apes, tigers, bears, and
lot's more skeletons Thomas is having the time of his life. It is time for
lunch and they are all bummed to go but were very hungry, all excited and
talking about what they saw inside laughing eating lunch. After lunch the
teacher said of we are going to see the tar pits before we go home. Thomas
loved the tar pits he is reading about them in his history book. The kids and
teacher headed to the back and their they are the tar pits wow Thomas was so
happy he knew they were here before he was and knew their might be treasures in
side.
It was time to go and all the kids were getting tired but had fun,
specially Thomas this is one of his favorite days he was glad he went to
school. The End!
